Comments on: Tunnel

By: JCK

JCK — Sun, 11 Oct 2009 16:28:31 +0000

Beautiful and haunting, Jennifer. And now you’re already in the tunnel, and headed to the light.

By: anymommy

anymommy — Sun, 13 Sep 2009 04:23:19 +0000

I’ve missed you. I absolutely love the last two lines. Such hope and peace in that simple, brilliant description.

By: PAPA

PAPA — Wed, 09 Sep 2009 03:22:24 +0000

For me, it’s like I’ll think I get it figured out, then I’m stuck again.

Maybe I need to be a jet figther instead of a train.

By: flutter

flutter — Wed, 09 Sep 2009 01:10:50 +0000

You are the fastest train in this tunnel. You have the steam to get through, to that warm sun where you are compelled to shine.

By: maggie, dammit

maggie, dammit — Tue, 08 Sep 2009 21:34:59 +0000

The curved tunnel… how brilliant is that? I’m so sorry for your pain but it breeds such lovely words.

Thinking of you.

By: fancy feet

fancy feet — Tue, 08 Sep 2009 21:24:18 +0000

“To trust the wind that carries away those wishes, and know that you might not get all the things you hope for, or enough of them, but there is something up ahead, waiting.”

That is beautifully put. I hold on to that something too.

What Kimberly said…WOW.

By: Kimberly

Kimberly — Tue, 08 Sep 2009 17:50:22 +0000

WOW.

Fantastic piece of writing.

By: Bennie

Bennie — Tue, 08 Sep 2009 16:57:53 +0000

Wow!!! Just brilliant. That’s all I got because I’m speechless.

By: tysdaddy

tysdaddy — Tue, 08 Sep 2009 16:18:53 +0000

And thank you for your kind words over at Flutter’s. For the inspiration . . .

By: Daryl

Daryl — Tue, 08 Sep 2009 16:06:04 +0000

Been there …